common mistakes in extended essay and tips and advice on how to write it

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Mastering the Extended Essay - Essential Tips
Mastering the Extended Essay
Essential Tips, Mistakes to Avoid
Expert Guide By
Brent Whitted, PhD
Doctor of English Literature
Author of "IB English A Literature IB Prepared"
Former Hack Your Course Tutor

Common Mistakes and How to Avoid Them

1
Vague Research Question (RQ)
Formulating a research question that is too broad or narrow. Make sure your research question is focused, clear and can be reasonably addressed within the scope of the extended essay.
❌ Too Broad:
"How does climate change affect animals?"
This is overly broad and lacks specificity. It doesn't indicate which animals, aspects of climate change, or geographical regions.
✅ Well-Focused:
"How is the melting Arctic ice impacting the feeding patterns of polar bears in Northern Canada?"
Specific effect, specific species, specific location. Allows for targeted, manageable research.
2
Using Inappropriate or Unreliable Sources
Many websites are not suitable as academic sources. Focus on using scholarly articles, books, and primary sources. Always evaluate the credibility of your sources.
❌ Inappropriate Source:
Non-scientific, opinion-based blogs without citation of scientific data or studies.
✅ Appropriate Sources:
Scholarly articles from reputable journals (e.g., American Meteorological Society), IPCC reports, books by field experts, governmental/educational institution data.
3
Incorrect or Incomplete Referencing
Ideas that are not your own must always be properly cited to avoid plagiarism. Be consistent in following a standard citation style like MLA or APA.
Best Practice: Use a consistent citation style (MLA, APA, Chicago) throughout. Track all sources from the start. When in doubt, cite it!
4
Writing That Is Too Descriptive Rather Than Analytical
Don't just present facts; analyze them to build a coherent argument that reflects your original thinking and understanding of the topic. This approach demonstrates your ability to engage critically with the material, a key criterion for a successful Extended Essay.
Remember: Analysis shows understanding and critical thinking. Move beyond "what" to explore "why" and "how" to demonstrate depth.

Tips and Advice for Success

1
Strategic Deadline Planning for a Manageable Essay Process
Set personalized deadlines for completing each stage of the essay. This helps with time management and avoids last-minute rushes. Breaking up the work makes the task more manageable.
2
Cultivate a Strong Partnership with Your Supervisor
Establish a good working relationship with your supervisor. Take the initiative to set up regular meetings. Your supervisor's guidance is invaluable, so openly discuss your progress and challenges.
3
Crafting the Perfect Research Question: Your Essay's Foundation
Take the time to carefully develop your research question. A well-constructed research question is crucial as the backbone of your essay. Make sure it is specific, can be answered within 4000 words, and relates clearly to your subject area.
4
Efficient Source Management: Track Early, Avoid Stress
Keep meticulous track of all sources used from the very start. This saves time later and ensures you can easily revisit information and compile a complete bibliography. Consider using reference management software.
5
Avoid Easy Losses: Nail the Technical Details of Your Essay
Pay attention to all the required technical details of the essay – things like the title page, table of contents, page numbers, tables, graphs, etc. Losing marks on these easy things is avoidable.
6
Master Academic Honesty to Avoid Plagiarism
Understand academic honesty and how to avoid plagiarism. Always err on the side of over-citing rather than under-citing. Your work should represent your own thinking but build upon properly attributed previous work by others.
7
Embrace Feedback: Refine Your Essay with Constructive Insights
Be open to feedback from your supervisor and others. Use their advice to refine and strengthen your arguments and writing. Don't take constructive criticism personally.
8
Stay Motivated: Celebrate Small Wins and Seek Support When Needed
Stay motivated by setting small goals and rewarding your progress. If you hit a wall, talk to your supervisor. Remember that this is a learning process and an impressive accomplishment once completed.
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